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Hello, my name is Iman Danhaji, I'm sixteen years old. I'm from Figueras,Catalonia,Spain but my family is from Marroco. Than im morrocan. I am a student of IES Castelló d'Empuries. Now I crossing 1rt batxillerat. I have one brother and one sister, the brother's name is Dakir and sister's names is Samira. Dakir is the older brother and Samira the young one.

Very people ask me: "why are you doing bachillerat?". I don't have a exactly answar. Whit batxillerat I have more time for think about my future studies, becuse now I don't have a exactly idea. 

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Hello, my name is Iman Danhaji, I am sixteen years old. I'm from Figueras,Catalonia,Spain but my family is from Marroco. Than I am morrocan. I am a student at IES Castelló d'Empuries. Now I am studying 1rt batxillerat. I have one brother and one sister, my brother's name is Dakir and sister's names is Samira. Dakir is the elder brother and Samira the young one.

A lot of people ask me: "why are you doing bachillerat?". I don't have an exact answer. With batxillerat I have more time to think about my future studies, because now I don't have a exactly idea.
Best regreds.